Question

情景作文（1個(gè)大題；滿分10分）
根據(jù)提示和要求，寫(xiě)一篇短文。將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡情景作文空白處。
假設(shè)你的名字是李華,給你新認(rèn)識(shí)的朋友Jim 發(fā)個(gè)E-mail ,介紹你自己的基本情況（年齡，學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)校．班級(jí)，愛(ài)好，家庭情況等,至少寫(xiě)出5個(gè)完整的句子）E-mail的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出。
Dear Jim ，
I would like to tell you something about myself.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim ，
I would like to tell you something about myself. I am a student. I am thirteen years old . I am in Class One , Grade One in  No. 2  Middle School in Yongzhou.  I like English very much . I think you can help me with my English .  There are four people in my family . My father is an office worker and my mother is a Chinese teacher . My sister is a student, too. She is in Grade Two. I have a happy family .  Let’s  be good friends and help each other .
Please write soon.
All the best !
Yours，
Li Hua

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，介紹自己的基本情況。本題只給出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)、句式、關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。