Question

書面表達。（15分）
請你根據(jù)下表提供的材料，為中學(xué)生朋友寫一篇題為“Always Be Careful”的短文。

在家	看完電視后，及時關(guān)掉。獨自在家時，不要讓陌生人進屋，不邀請網(wǎng)友來家。
在學(xué)校	不要在教室里互相追逐；在運動時，注意保護自己。
在路上	遵守交通規(guī)則，比如：騎車時不要聽音樂；過馬路時，注意紅綠燈。

參考詞匯：網(wǎng)友：friends online 追逐run after
注意：1、請將作文答案寫在答題卡對應(yīng)位置。
2、內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名或校名）
3、詞數(shù)：70-90.（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)）
Always Be Careful
As a middle school student, We should try to stay away from danger as the problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.
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If all these are kept in mind, you sure to enjoy a much safer life.

Answer 1

After watching TV, you are supposed to turn it off in time. If you’re home alone, don’t open the door for strangers easily or invite friends that you have made online to your home.
While you are at school, running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous. At the same time, you should remember to protect yourself until doing sports. Once you are in the street traffic rules should be obeyed all the time. For example, never listen to music until while riding a bike, Besides, always follow the traffic lights.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第二人稱，時態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意情態(tài)動詞should后面動詞用原形。為了是表達更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。
點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時就會有法可依。