Question

下面是一位同學(xué)在學(xué)校論壇上發(fā)的帖子。假設(shè)你是Mary， 請(qǐng)根據(jù)他的這三個(gè)問(wèn)題給出你的建議。開(kāi)頭已給出，字?jǐn)?shù)：70詞左右 。
Dear friend, 
What a terrible day today ! This morning I was late for school again and my teacher was very angry with me. Then I found I left my math book at home. Because I played computer games too late last night, I fell asleep in class this afternoon. I didn’t hear what the teacher said. I didn’t know how to do my homework. I really don’t know what to do. Could you please give me some advice?
Yours,
Looking for help
參考詞匯：make mistakes, say sorry to... ;  get...ready ;   listen carefully in class；                     spend more time on...；help...with..
Dear looking for help ,
Here is some advice for you .
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Yours,                      
Mary 

Answer 1

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試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信。材料通過(guò)一封來(lái)信 體現(xiàn)出來(lái)，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信，爭(zhēng)取在寫(xiě)作中對(duì)于來(lái)信內(nèi)容都有所回應(yīng)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。