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“丹東是我家，文明靠大家!”作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)積極參與創(chuàng)建文明城市的建設(shè) ，盡我們所能去做點(diǎn)事情。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
提示： 1. 不得透露考生真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)、學(xué)校名稱
2. 這些詞匯或許對(duì)你有幫助：respect(尊敬)，be polite to,traffic rules,in trouble,
protect(保護(hù)),the zebra crossing(斑馬線)，step on the grass,red light,litter.......
3. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dandong is now making its effort to become a civilized( 文明的) city .As a student

Answer 1

Dandong is now making its effort to become a civilized( 文明的) city .As a student  As students, what should we do?
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red.
What's more, we should protect our environment. For example, We mustn't step on the grass and climb trees.
Litter mustn't be thrown everywhere.
Dandong is our hometown. Let's try our best to make it a civilized city.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心是以“丹東是我家，文明靠大家!”為主題的。作者介紹了作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)積極參與創(chuàng)建文明城市的建設(shè) ，盡我們所能去做點(diǎn)事情。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，作者從我們中學(xué)生要為我們的城市做些什么為中心；用到了形態(tài)動(dòng)詞we must do我們必須做什么，和 we should do我們應(yīng)該做什么，Litter mustn't be thrown everywhere這些句子給文章增色不少。