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假如你是王昆，你的美國網(wǎng)友Tom對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日“春節(jié)”非常感興趣，請你以“My Favorite Festival”為題，寫一封E-mail.，給他做一介紹。
1．要點包括：節(jié)日簡介、節(jié)日準備、節(jié)日活動等；
2．字數(shù)要求：100字左右。
3．提示：the Spring Festival, traditional, get together, clean up, be dressed in…

△Subject: My Favorite Festival                     From: Wang Kun

Dear Tom,

Answer 1

One possible version：
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people.
Several days before the new year, we begin to prepare for it. My parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned up.
On the eve of the new year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch “the Spring Evening” on TV until twelve o’clock. On the first day of the new year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we say “Happy New Year” to each other. We pay new year calls to friends and relatives. That day my parents and relatives give “Red-bags” (money) to us children. All of us have a great time.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，向美國網(wǎng)友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日“春節(jié)”。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：The Spring Festival is......；we begin to......；the whole family get together......；we watch .......；we say .......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意運用題中所提示的單詞和短語。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了春節(jié)的重要性，接下來介紹春節(jié)的準備活動，最后春節(jié)期間人們的活動。此處用了 prepare for，cleaned up，get together，is dressed in，have a great time等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。