Question

三年的初中生活即將過去，同學(xué)們即將告別熟悉的老師和同學(xué)進(jìn)入高中，進(jìn)入一個(gè)新的環(huán)境中學(xué)習(xí)和生活。在新學(xué)校里，怎樣和別人相處？怎樣結(jié)交新朋友呢？請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇短文介紹交友之道。
要點(diǎn)：①友善待人，不與人爭吵或打架，盡可能交更多的朋友。
②學(xué)習(xí)上與同學(xué)們互相幫助，共同進(jìn)步，力爭取得優(yōu)異成績。
③課余時(shí)間多與同學(xué)們交流、溝通，使自己變得開朗。
④積極參加各種活動，多參加社團(tuán)活動，發(fā)展自己的特長。
要求：1.文章必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，建議內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充。
2.詞數(shù)不得少于80詞。
3.字跡工整，卷面整潔。
提示詞：進(jìn)步 make progress 交流 communicate 積極參加 take an active part in

Answer 1

We will finish the junior high school soon, and we may enter a new school to know many new students and teachers. But how can we make new friends? Here is some advice:
Firstly, we should be kind with others. Don’t quarrel or even fight with others, so that we can make more friends. Secondly, try to help each other in with study. We can make progress together and get good grade. Thirdly, communicate with your classmates as much as possible, so you can know your classmates better and you can be more outgoing. Finally, you should take an active part in all kinds of activities and clubs, where you can develop your interests and make more friends.
I think all of us can get along with others well and make many friends then.

試題分析：試題分析：這是篇命題作文。題目中給出了寫作要點(diǎn)，在作文里一定要包含這些要點(diǎn)，并對內(nèi)容加以擴(kuò)充；各要點(diǎn)之間可使用一些承接性的句子和短語來增加文章的流暢性。文中注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用等問題。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表述準(zhǔn)確流利；文中用了Firstly首先；Secondly第二；Thirdly第三；Finally最后，增加文章的結(jié)構(gòu)性。另外文中使用了些長句you should take an active part in all kinds of activities and clubs, where you can develop your interests and make more friends.你應(yīng)該積極參加各種活動和社團(tuán)，在那里你能培養(yǎng)興趣并且結(jié)交更多的朋友。Where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。