Question

書面表達（共15分）

下面是一份關(guān)于大家對90后看法的調(diào)查表，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文，80字左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

正面觀點	反面觀點
90后活潑，精力充沛	90后不夠冷靜，有點沖動
90后興趣廣泛，有創(chuàng)造力	90后過分依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)
90后待人真誠，朋友多	90后注重穿著而忽視了學習
大家都希望90后能夠嚴格要求自己，努力學習知識，并期待他們有一個更美好的未來。

 

What are the children born in the 1990s like? Here is a survey.

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Answer 1

What are the children born in the 1990s like? Here is a survey. Some people think those children are lively and energetic. They have wide interest and they are creative. Besides, they are kind to people and have many friends. But other people have different opinions. They think those children are not calm enough. They rely much on Internet. Also, they pay more attention to appearance, but pay little attention to their studies.

Everyone hope those children can study harder and get more knowledge. They wish them to have a better future.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)表格中的一項調(diào)查結(jié)果，來說一說人們對90后的看法。通過閱讀表格可知，大家對90后的看法可以分為兩個方面，一個是正面的觀點，認為他們積極、活潑，愛好廣泛，朋友多；另一個是反面的觀點，覺得他們沖動，不愛學習，注重外表等。最后是人們對90后孩子們的一個期望。我們需要將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。因為內(nèi)容較多，我們在寫作時需要注意表達的層次。我們可以將這篇作文分成兩段或三段來寫，第一段寫正面的觀點，第二段寫反面的觀點，最后是人們對90后孩子們的希望�；蛘邔⒄�面和反面的觀點歸為一段，分成兩段來寫。寫作時，要注意表達的流暢，多使用好的短語和句型，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，作者按照題目的要求將這個調(diào)查結(jié)果給我們詳細的敘述了出來。整篇短文作者是分成兩段來寫的，第一段是兩種不同的觀點，正面的和反面的；第二段是大家對他們的期望。這樣分段來寫使得文章層次清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。另外短文中作者還使用了較好的句型，如Besides, they are kind to people and have many friends.、They rely much on Internet.、 Also, they pay more attention to appearance, but pay little attention to their studies. 、They wish them to have a better future.等。作者用到了短語besides, also,…enough,并列句等。

考點：提綱類作文。