Question

俗話(huà)說(shuō)“遠(yuǎn)親不如近鄰”， 鄰居對(duì)我們的生活非常重要。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示， 以“My neighbour”為題，寫(xiě)一篇作文。要點(diǎn)如下：
1．我是Jim，住在陽(yáng)光社區(qū)，在那里我結(jié)識(shí)了一個(gè)新鄰居叫Peter。我和他住同一棟樓，他住在五樓。
2．他是一名警察，在附近的警察局上班，他工作很努力；
3．他熱心而且樂(lè)于助人，當(dāng)人們遇到各種問(wèn)題時(shí)，都向他求助；
4．我們社區(qū)的每個(gè)人都喜歡他，我們有他這樣的好鄰居真是太幸運(yùn)了。
5．我的感受….
注意：
1．短文須包括以上要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。
2．可展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右。
My neighbour
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Answer 1

My neighbour
As the saying goes“A neighbor is better than a distant relative”.Neighbors are very important in our lives.
I am Jim.I live in Sunshine Community.I have a new neighbour, Peter.We live in the same building.He lives on the fifth floor.He is a policeman in a police station nearby. He works hard . He is kind-hearted and ready to help others.When people are in trouble,they usually ask him for help.Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him.So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour.
I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood. I like our neighbours.

試題分析：根據(jù)提示可知這篇是寫(xiě)我的鄰居的有關(guān)情況，所以短文應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)等問(wèn)題,注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意文后要適當(dāng)提出自己的建議。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)，增加了文章的色彩，如：He is kind-hearted and ready to help others. So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour.等，短文用了一些連詞如when，so，and等，使句式不再單一。提醒學(xué)生平時(shí)注意一些短語(yǔ)和句式的積累，以便在以后的寫(xiě)作中使用。