Question

初中即將畢業(yè)，同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。就此問題，你在英語課上做了一個以“ Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的值日報告，談?wù)勀愕淖龇�，與同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗, 內(nèi)容包括：　　
普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試　　
我過去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí)　　
我成功緩解壓力的方法及效果：……　　
要求:1、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；　　
2、詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)�！　�
Less Pressure Makes Better Life　　
Hello, my classmates!　　
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure.　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!　

Answer 1

One possible version:　　
Less Pressure Makes Better Life　　
Hello, my classmates!　　
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. 　　
I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends. 　　
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.　　
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!

本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)，標(biāo)題是更少的壓力會使生活更美好，寫作的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括壓力是個嚴(yán)重的問題，學(xué)生們普遍存在的壓力，我個人過去的壓力，以及如何來緩解壓力的方法和措施，修飾時應(yīng)注意不同時態(tài)的使用，主要使用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時，同時要注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。