Question

動(dòng)物是人類(lèi)的朋友，你校擬組織以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”為題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。假如你是李鳴，將要參加此次比賽，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿推薦自己，內(nèi)容如下：

要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右，演講稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2.所寫(xiě)演講稿必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
I want to be a volunteer to protect animals
Hello, everyone. I am Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I am glad to make a speech here.
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Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

I Want to Be A Volunteer of Protecting Animals
A very good morning / afternoon to you all ,everyone.My name is XXX,a student from XXX Middle School.As we know,animals are our good friends.Hower,as we can see,some animals,especially rare animals,are becoming fewer and fewer.
In order to protect these animals,I want to be a volunteer。I am active and out-going.I like animals,such as cats,dogs,rabits as well as everything related to animals,like newspapers,magazines and videos.I often take part in the activities of protecing animals.For example, last month I presented a show called Stopping Hunting.Many people came and supported me.
To be a good volunteer,I need to do more,I will read some books about animals.Meanwhile,I will join a club whose aim is to protect animals.
I believe I can do the work well,I hope you can give me the chance.
That's all.Thank you.

試題分析:這是一篇命題作文，寫(xiě)一封推薦信推薦自己。寫(xiě)作中注意將自己的情況介紹清楚并表達(dá)自己參加比賽的意愿。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。