Question

文段表達(dá)。（共15分）

根據(jù)中文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。（請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名。）

在和諧社會(huì)里，人與人之間的互幫互助已經(jīng)構(gòu)成了我們生活中的重要組成部分。請(qǐng)你描述一個(gè)幫助過(guò)你或者你幫助過(guò)的人和事，并談?wù)劯邢搿?/p>

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I'll never forget the person who helped meThe person I shall never forget is my junior high English teacher, Linda.She speaks beautiful English and she's very kind and friendly. She helped me a lot in my English learning. She always encouraged us to practise more. We often did pair work, group work, discussions and reports. She also brought us a lot of really nice English songs and chants. We never found it boring to learn English. As a result, I made great progress in English. What's more, I really enjoy learning English.I'll never forget Linda who helped me in my English study and I'll try to help others as much as I can like Linda.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外，在描述時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意人稱(chēng)的變化。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。