Question

請(qǐng)你以My pen friend 為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向同學(xué)介紹你的筆友。

姓名	Lisa	年齡	13
籍貫	美國(guó)紐約（New York）	學(xué)校	No. 3 Middle School
外貌	長(zhǎng)頭發(fā)， 又高又瘦，
愛(ài)好	最喜歡藍(lán)色，喜歡看書(shū)，游泳和下棋

 要求：
1. 用詞規(guī)范， 語(yǔ)法正確。
2. 句意通順，要點(diǎn)齊全。
3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
4. 不少于60詞。 
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                 

Answer 1

My pen friend is Lisa.She is thirtheen years old..She’s from New York,the US.Now,she studies in No.3 Middle School.She is hard-working. All the teachers like her.
I have a photo of her. She has long hairand she is tall and thin. I think she is very pretty.Of all the colors, she likes bule best. So do I . Besides,she likes resding,swimming,and playing chess.
Now Lisa and I are good friends.

試題分析：這是一篇圖表式作文。主要是人物介紹。提供的信息很詳細(xì)：年齡，地址，愛(ài)好，學(xué)校。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意動(dòng)詞的第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)。主要時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】初級(jí)學(xué)生能合理發(fā)揮，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)很是不錯(cuò)。在文中還用到了新穎的句式更使文章富有邏輯性。如：Of all the colors，So do I，Besides。提醒學(xué)生在平時(shí)要多記多背一些短語(yǔ)和句子。