Question

請你以My pen friend 為題，寫一篇短文，向同學(xué)介紹你的筆友。

姓名	Lisa	年齡	13
籍貫	美國紐約（New York）	學(xué)校	No. 3 Middle School
外貌	長頭發(fā)， 又高又瘦，
愛好	最喜歡藍(lán)色，喜歡看書，游泳和下棋

 要求：
1. 用詞規(guī)范， 語法正確。
2. 句意通順，要點齊全。
3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
4. 不少于60詞。 
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                 

Answer 1

My pen friend is Lisa.She is thirtheen years old..She’s from New York,the US.Now,she studies in No.3 Middle School.She is hard-working. All the teachers like her.
I have a photo of her. She has long hairand she is tall and thin. I think she is very pretty.Of all the colors, she likes bule best. So do I . Besides,she likes resding,swimming,and playing chess.
Now Lisa and I are good friends.

試題分析：這是一篇圖表式作文。主要是人物介紹。提供的信息很詳細(xì)：年齡，地址，愛好，學(xué)校。寫作時注意動詞的第三人稱單數(shù)。主要時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。
【亮點說明】初級學(xué)生能合理發(fā)揮，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)很是不錯。在文中還用到了新穎的句式更使文章富有邏輯性。如：Of all the colors，So do I，Besides。提醒學(xué)生在平時要多記多背一些短語和句子。