Question

根據(jù)以下兩幅圖畫(huà)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記,記敘今天發(fā)生的事,并描述自己的心情和感受。

要求:1.合理發(fā)揮想像,使內(nèi)容充實(shí)完整；
2.意思連貫、語(yǔ)言通順、語(yǔ)法正確；
3. 詞數(shù):80字左右。
January 6, 2014, Monday, Sunny
This afternoon,
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Answer 1

January 6, 2014, Thursday, Sunny
This afternoon when I was shopping in the supermarket after school I saw a little boy crying right in the middle of the aisle. He cried so loudly that a crowd of people gathered around him. The boy was about three or four years old, with tears on his face. An old lady said, "The boy must be lost. Where is his mother?" I walked to him and gave him a lollipop. "Let’s look for your mother!" I said. Then I took him to the service desk to make an announcement. After ten minutes, his mother arrived. On seeing his mother the boy burst into laughter at once. I am really happy to help the boy although I was blamed by my mother for coming home late. Just like the warm sunshine, helping others makes me feel warm.

試題分析：寫(xiě)漫畫(huà)作文首先要仔細(xì)觀察畫(huà)面內(nèi)容，要觀察圖畫(huà)的全貌，要觀察背景與人物，要觀察圖畫(huà)的細(xì)節(jié)，還要分清主次。第二，要深入體會(huì)圖畫(huà)作者的創(chuàng)作意圖，要知道作者在提倡什么，反對(duì)什么，頌揚(yáng)什么諷刺什么，這樣在寫(xiě)作時(shí)才能把握的準(zhǔn)確。第三，要根據(jù)觀察、體會(huì)發(fā)揮自己的想象與聯(lián)想，把作文寫(xiě)充實(shí)、寫(xiě)生動(dòng)。第四，要明確作文寫(xiě)作的目的要求，做到作文與要求相符。這里要看出圖畫(huà)中的小孩在做什么，那個(gè)小男孩又做了什么。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: He ut three or four years old, with tears on his face. On seeing his mother the boy burst into laughter at once.等。運(yùn)用了連詞when，so…that等，提醒學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更加精彩。