Question

請以My best friend為題，用英語寫一篇70詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容提示如下。
我最好的朋友叫Max；
戴小而圓的眼鏡，幽默，有耐心，他還……；
在混合學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，是個尖子生，最擅長數(shù)學(xué)和英語；
非常癡迷自己動手做東西，曾自己制作音樂盒作為生日禮物送給他的媽媽。
注意：
短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；
第2要點的內(nèi)容須用1-2句展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
標(biāo)題和第一要點已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
My best friend
My best friend is Max.                                                          
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

My best friend is Max. He wears small round glasses. He is humorous and patient. He is also helpful. He often gives his seat on the bus to someone in need. He studies in a mixed school. He is a top student. He is the best at Maths and English. He is crazy about “DIY”.Once he made his mother a music box by himself as a birthday present. It made his mother very happy.

試題分析：本文是材料作文，考生在寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題，把握寫作要求和寫作目的。本文要求寫一篇短文，介紹自己最好的朋友Max。應(yīng)該用第三人稱做主語。時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作前寫出有關(guān)的短語和固定表達(dá)備用。
【亮點說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點，語句通順，標(biāo)點符號運用正確。還恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用了些短語和句式，如be good at ;make sb +adj等等。