Question

你（Sam）在學(xué)校有很多朋友，你們彼此相處得很好。但是有一天，你的一個(gè)朋友丟了一百元錢。他認(rèn)為是你拿了他的錢，而且他還把這件事告訴了其他朋友，于是他們對你不再像過去那樣友好了。你對此感到很苦惱。你需要幫助，你要求你姑姑提出建議。
Dear aunt,
Hi!
                                                                                             
                                                                                       
                                                                                            
                                                                                         
                                                                                          
                                                                      Yours
Sam

Answer 1

Dear Aunt,
　　Hi! I have made many friends at my school. We are getting along very well. But one day one of my friends lost 100 yuan. He thought I had taken his money and he told others about it. They are not as friendly to me as they were before. I’m very unhappy.
　　I need your help. Can you give me some advice?
　　                                                                     Yours,
　　                                                                      Sam

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【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文運(yùn)用一些常見短語made many friends交朋友； get along well 相處的好；give sb some advice給某人建議。He thought I had taken his money and he told others about it這個(gè)句子中and連接兩個(gè)并列的句子，thought的賓語從句中用過去完成時(shí)。They are not as friendly to me as they were before.這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用not as…as，不象……,表示同級比較的否定式。