Question

假如你是李明，住在無(wú)錫。你的美國(guó)筆友米莉來(lái)信談到她所住的城市，并希望了解無(wú)錫的情況。請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)一封回信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
位于中國(guó)東部，風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，適合居住；
在過(guò)去的十年里發(fā)生了巨大的變化……
但是還是存在著一些問(wèn)題，比如水、空氣污染；
去年政府開(kāi)始采取措施保護(hù)環(huán)境；
你希望米莉有空時(shí)來(lái)你家鄉(xiāng)參觀游玩。
注意：
1. 短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順；
2. 第2要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾均已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Millie,
It’s very kind of you to write to me about your beautiful city. Now I would like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi. _____________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Millie,
It’s very kind of you to write to me about your beautiful city. Now I would like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi.
It lies in the east of China. You can see beautiful views here. It’s a suitable place to live. There have been great changes in the past ten years. There are many trees and flowers everywhere. And there are many modern shops. More and more tourists are coming here for a visit. However, there are also some problems, such as air and water pollution. The government started to take action to protect the environment last year. I hope you will travel to my home town when you are free.
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試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: a suitable place to live合適的生活的地方；in the past ten years.在過(guò)去的十年中；such as例如The government started to take action to protect the environment last year. 政府在去年開(kāi)始采取行動(dòng)來(lái)保護(hù)環(huán)境。等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.