Question

隨著揚(yáng)州經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，同時(shí)我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴(yán)重。去年冬天霧霾（the thick haze）天氣接二連三出現(xiàn)，生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開(kāi)討論美麗揚(yáng)州應(yīng)該從何做起。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，向報(bào)社投稿。

揚(yáng)州現(xiàn)狀	美麗揚(yáng)州從我做起	未來(lái)展望
車輛越來(lái)越多 空氣越來(lái)越差 ……	出門(mén)做公交 …… ……	水更清，天更藍(lán) …… …….

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。

Answer 1

With the development of Yangzhou, more and more families have cars.However, the environment of our city is becoming worse and worse. Last winter, we experienced several days of the worst air pollution in history. And many people got sick because of the polluted air.
As the student of this ancient city, we should take actions to beautify our hometown. We can take buses to go out; we can ask our relatives not to drive cars as often as possible. What’s more, we can call on the whole society to plant more trees.
If each of us tries our best to protect our environment, I believe we will enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers. Yangzhou will be more suitable and comfortable to live in.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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