Question

今天上午你們班級(jí)舉辦了愛心義賣(charity sale)活動(dòng)，根據(jù)提示寫一篇日記。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
同學(xué)們準(zhǔn)備了自制的模型飛機(jī)，風(fēng)箏等。
很多老師和同學(xué)受邀參加這次活動(dòng)，本次活動(dòng)很成功，
義賣所得的2000多元已全部捐給希望工程(Project Hope)．
這是一次有意義的經(jīng)歷
5. 我們希望……
注意：1. 詞數(shù)70左右，日記開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 日記應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；
3. 第5要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用1-2句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Friday，June 4th                                                         Sunny
This morning our class had a charity sale on the playground．_______________________
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Answer 1

This morning our class had a charity show on the playground．We prepared many things and they were all made by ourselves, such as model planes, kites and so on. Many teachers and students were invited to take part in it. It was a great success. We got over 2000 yuan in the end. We have donated the money to Project Hope. It is a meaningful experience. I hope every can give a hand and the world will be much better.

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