Question

 九年級(jí)的學(xué)生面臨中考，你的理想學(xué)校是哪里，為什么要選擇這個(gè)學(xué)校，說(shuō)出你的理由。你應(yīng)該怎樣利用這段時(shí)間來(lái)復(fù)習(xí)各門(mén)功課，調(diào)整好狀態(tài)，充分應(yīng)戰(zhàn)。（提示：你選擇的學(xué)校的優(yōu)勢(shì)。你在學(xué)習(xí)上的時(shí)間安排，針對(duì)自己不足的科目采取的措施等等）。字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80個(gè)字。
                                                                            
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

This is the last year of my junior high school and I am facing a big exam. After graduating from my school, I want to join the NO.1 Middle School to study, which is the best high school in my city. I hear that there are many excellent teachers in that school and the teaching grade is very good there. I think I can study well there. What’s more, NO.1 Middle School is not far from my home. During the last few months, I will make a good plan to study for the final exam, especially English. Although I have a little difficulty in learning English, I will work harder to improve it. And I will practice more to improve my listening ability. I hope I can realize my dream.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以一個(gè)初三學(xué)生的身份對(duì)自己即將畢業(yè)，面臨中考這一問(wèn)題來(lái)寫(xiě)一篇作文。該題目有點(diǎn)半開(kāi)放性，材料中給的范圍很寬泛。但是我們還是得要注意它給出的提示，因?yàn)樗�給我們規(guī)定了書(shū)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。包括，畢業(yè)后選擇哪所學(xué)校，這所學(xué)校的優(yōu)勢(shì)在哪里；你學(xué)習(xí)上的時(shí)間如何安排；針對(duì)弱勢(shì)科目采取什么措施等。這些都屬于開(kāi)放性的，同學(xué)們要展開(kāi)想象力，將以上內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。同時(shí)還要注意行文的連貫，表達(dá)的流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文書(shū)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容完整，層次分明，是一篇不錯(cuò)的學(xué)生作文。首先作者對(duì)自己目前面臨的情勢(shì)做了分析，即將畢業(yè)，而且還要參加中考。然后作者寫(xiě)了自己想去的學(xué)校，并寫(xiě)出了這所學(xué)校的兩個(gè)優(yōu)勢(shì)。接下來(lái)作者寫(xiě)了自己最后這段時(shí)間的安排，以及針對(duì)自己不足的科目，如英語(yǔ)，將會(huì)采取什么措施來(lái)提高。最后作者表達(dá)了自己的愿望。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意了使用句型或短語(yǔ)，以使文章表達(dá)流暢，有節(jié)奏，如After graduating from my school, I want to join、I hear that there are many excellent teachers in that school and the teaching grade is very good there、Although I have a little difficulty in learning English, I will work harder to improve it等。