Question

在日常生活中，我們可能會(huì)遇到一些令人煩惱的事情需要得到朋友的幫助。假如你叫李明，是中學(xué)生張華的QQ聊友，昨天你收到了他的一個(gè)電子郵件。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封不少于60個(gè)詞的回復(fù)，針對(duì)他的問(wèn)題談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�并提出你的建議。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)。

Hi! Li Ming, I happened to see a cell phone on my way home after school today. So I was very happy to pick it up. To my surprise, it was an iPhone4. I put it into my pocket. Now it is lying on the table in my bedroom. I haven’t told my parents about it. I don’t know if I should return it to its owner. What do you think of it? Can you give me some advice?                                                           Yours, Zhang Hua

 

Hi! Zhang Hua, I’m glad to get your message. _______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ Do you agree with me? Yours, Li Ming

Answer 1

Hi! Zhang Hua,
I’m glad to get your message. Now an iPhone4 is so popular that everyone wants to have one. If this happens to me, I will probably have the same idea as you. But what do you feel about if you lose anything? I think the owner must be very worried at the moment. So you should return it to its owner at once. You’d better check its phone numbers and choose one of them to call back. In this way, maybe you can find its owner. The owner will be sure to thank you for your kindness. If you don’t have time, you can ask your parents or your teachers for help.
Do you agree with me?
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封回信。本題材料主要是一封來(lái)信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信，爭(zhēng)取在回信中對(duì)來(lái)信中的問(wèn)題都有所回應(yīng)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。