Question

不久前，全國有部分省市出臺一項新政策：高考英語將由150分降為100分，此事在國內引起極大爭議。有的人認為此舉很好，有的人則認為不妥。作為一名中學生，你的看法是什么？請分析其原因。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。
3. 參考詞匯：reform改革；master掌握；advanced先進的
Not long before, a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100. …

Answer 1

One possible version：
Not long before, a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100.
As a student, in my opinion, it is of the same importance to learn Chinese and English well. We Chinese certainly should learn our mother language well. At the same time, English is an international language and tool. We should master it better to know about the world and learn advanced technology abroad to serve our motherland. What’s more, as China is developing quickly, we have more chances to communicate with foreigners in English.
In a word, whether the mark of English will be reduced or not, we students should learn it well.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，說出自己對高考英語分值下降的看法。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：it is of the same importance to......；We Chinese certainly should......；English is......；as China is ......及whether the mark of English will be......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意運用提供的參考詞匯。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了一項新政策：高考英語將由150分降為100分，接下來介紹自己對這項政策的看法，最后無論如何都要學好英語。此處用了of the same importance，know about，have more chances to ，communicate with等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。