Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）
讀了以上同學(xué)的調(diào)查報(bào)告，你有何感想？你是否也曾沉迷于電腦游戲？請以“遠(yuǎn)離電腦游戲”為題寫一篇短文。
內(nèi)容包括：1．中學(xué)生玩電腦游戲的負(fù)面影響（包括對學(xué)習(xí)、經(jīng)濟(jì)和身體的影響等）。
2．中學(xué)生的主要任務(wù)是把時(shí)間和精力放在學(xué)習(xí)上，學(xué)好各門功課。
3．建議中學(xué)生遠(yuǎn)離電腦游戲，專心學(xué)習(xí)。
寫作要求：1．條理清晰，意思連貫，詞句通順。
2．不能照抄原文，不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
3．詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

How to stay away from playing computer games?
These days computer is very popular among young students besides me. When I feel tired or lonely, I often spend a lot of time playing computer games. Today I read the survey about my classmates. I was surprised to find how the computer games could influence us. I knew why there were so many young people disliked studying hard and how some students became thieves.
Everyone knows playing come spend too much time on computer games, we’ll have no time to do sports. Playing games too mputer can help us feel relaxed. But if we lose ourselves in it, we may have an unhealthy life. For example, if wuch does harm to our eyes. That’s why so many students wear glasses.
As a student, it’s our duty to study. We must try our best to do well in our lessons. To keep healthy, stay away from playing computer games. As long as we work together, we will have a happy school life

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹中學(xué)生玩電腦游戲的負(fù)面影響（包括對學(xué)習(xí)、經(jīng)濟(jì)和身體的影響等）;中學(xué)生的主要任務(wù)是把時(shí)間和精力放在學(xué)習(xí)上，學(xué)好各門功課;建議中學(xué)生遠(yuǎn)離電腦游戲，專心學(xué)習(xí).根據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會(huì)用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),注意邏輯性和句式的變化。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時(shí)注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如spend a lot of time playing computer games，I was surprised to find how the computer games could influence us. But if we lose ourselves in it, we may have an unhealthy life.，When I feel tired or lonely, To keep healthy等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。