Question

目前，我們的周圍環(huán)境遭到嚴(yán)重破壞，污染隨處可見。請以“How to Protect Our Environment”為題寫一篇演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 列舉2-3個有關(guān)環(huán)境污染的現(xiàn)象，如：看不到藍(lán)色的天空，看不到河里的魚，喝不到干凈水等。
2. 提出2-3個建議保護(hù)環(huán)境，如：步行或騎自行車上學(xué)，不隨處扔垃圾，不得往河里傾倒廢水等。
作文要求：
1、不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名；
2、語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。標(biāo)題、開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
How to Protect Our Environment
Good morning, everyone! Our environment is becoming worse and worse day by day.
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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

One possible version:
How to Protect Our Environment
Good morning, everyone! Our environment is becoming worse and worse day by day. Now we can’t see blue sky in the cities in the daytime. There is no fish in the dirty rivers or lakes. Even worse, a lot of people can’t drink clean water. It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment. As a student, we should ride a bike or walk to school every day. We shouldn’t pour waste water into rivers. And don’t throw rubbish here and there. If everyone makes contribution to the environment, it will get cleaner and tidier soon.
That’s all. Thank you.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: worse and worse越來越糟；day by day一天天；a lot of許多；be time for sb to do sth該某人做某事了；here and there到處；make contribution to對……做貢獻(xiàn)等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。