Question

上周你校同學(xué)舉行了一場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)討論會(huì)，討論的題目是“是否應(yīng)該發(fā)展小汽車產(chǎn)業(yè)？”參加討論的A組和B組同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)截然相反。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提供的信息給你們學(xué)校的English Newsletter寫(xiě)一篇稿件，客觀地介紹討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。

A組的觀點(diǎn)	B組的觀點(diǎn)
1. 應(yīng)該大量生產(chǎn)小汽車 2. 給人們帶來(lái)方便 3. 創(chuàng)造更多就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì) 4. ……	1. 應(yīng)該減少小汽車數(shù)量 2. 引起交通問(wèn)題 3. 造成空氣污染 4. ……
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

要   求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。
Last week, we had a discussion about whether we should develop car industry.              
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                

Answer 1

Last week, we had a discussion about whether we should develop car industry. During the discussion, Group A think we should make more cars. They show us that cars can bring great advantages to people, and also can create more jobs for local people. Of course, it will improve our economy.
However, Group B have the thought different from theirs. They think the government should reduce the number of cars, since most roads are getting crowded. Too many cars will certainly cause heavy traffic. Besides, cars will send off a lot of waste gas. They also think we should encourage public transportation, such as buses and undergrounds.
In my opinion, I agree with Group B. Although cars can make our lives better, a clean environment is more important to us. I think we should pay more attention to the importance to our health.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文。題中已經(jīng)給出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求，寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要注意要點(diǎn)的齊全，并對(duì)相關(guān)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充；各要點(diǎn)之間可使用一些承接性的句子和短語(yǔ)，來(lái)增加文章的通暢性。另外寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】這篇文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表述準(zhǔn)確流利。文中使用了一些長(zhǎng)句子，例如：They think the government should reduce the number of cars, since most roads are getting crowded.他們認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)該減少生產(chǎn)汽車，因?yàn)楹芏嗟缆范甲兊脫頂D了。Although cars can make our lives better, a clean environment is more important to us.盡管汽車使我們的生活變得更好，但是潔凈的環(huán)境對(duì)我們更重要。