Question

上周末你帶了個(gè)外國(guó)朋友游覽了江陰，并花了約半天時(shí)間游覽了鵝鼻嘴公園(Ebizui Park)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)給學(xué)校青青草文學(xué)社寫一篇報(bào)道。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1、鵝鼻嘴公園是江陰最著名的名勝之一，每天吸引大量游客來(lái)賞景；
2、幾年前，有些游客無(wú)視保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性，亂扔垃圾，踐踏草坪；
3、如今發(fā)生了巨大的變化，是許多鳥類的理想家園；
4、為把江陰建成最適合人居的地方，你將……
注意： 1、第4要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用1-2句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2、詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Last weekend I showed a foreign friend around Jiangyin.We stayed in Ebizui Park for about half a day. Ebizui Park is one of the famous places of interest in Jiangyin.It attracts many visitors to the park to enjoy the beautiful view.Years ago some visitors didn’t know the importance of protecting the environment.They threw rubbish about and stepped on the grass.There have been great changes recently.It has been an ideal home for many birds.In order to make Jiangyin a better place to live,I will work hard…

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其一般過(guò)去時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: Ebizui Park is one of the famous places of interest in Jiangyin, Years ago some visitors didn’t know the importance of protecting the environment.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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