Question

寫作(計(jì)20分)
人人都在追求幸福生活，不同的人追求幸福生活的方式不同，你是怎樣追求幸福生活的？請(qǐng)以My happy life 為題，寫一篇英語作文，介紹一下你的幸福生活。
作文必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1.在家經(jīng)常幫助父母和其他家庭成員，他們也很愛你。
2.在學(xué)校認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，尊敬老師，與同學(xué)相處友好。
3.平時(shí)注意不亂扔垃圾，寬容待人。
4.有許多好朋友，生活得很開心，始終帶著笑容面對(duì)一切。
要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。
My happy life
Everyone wants to have a happy life. Different people have different ways to get it.          ___________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

My happy life
Everyone wants to have a happy life. Different people have different ways to get it. I have my own way to stay happy.
At home I help my parents with housework. And I also often help my grandparents. We all love each other. At school, I work hard at all the subjects. The teachers all love me. And I get on well with my classmates. I never throw litter around. I never say bad words about others. I have a lot of friends. I often talk with them about many interested things. I am always happy. I am always wearing a smile on my face all the time.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的幸福生活。題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語可以用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。