Question

2013年，湖南衛(wèi)視明星親子真人秀節(jié)目《爸爸去哪兒》連續(xù)十期收視奪魁，并問鼎年度上星頻道中收視最高的季播節(jié)目。你班同學也非常喜歡看，并關于“什么樣的爸爸才是好爸爸”展開了討論，請你根據(jù)下面的表格提示，用英語簡要的介紹并表明你自己的觀點。
注：詞數(shù)80-100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計入字數(shù)。

大家的觀點	特點
大部分學生	和孩子做朋友，和孩子一起玩，讓孩子開心
一些學生	孩子犯錯時嚴肅批評（criticize），幫助孩子進步
少數(shù)學生	細心照顧孩子，孩子可以依靠爸爸
你	……

The other day, we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father._____________________            
                                                                                               

Answer 1

The other day,we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father.
Most students thought that a good father could make friends with children,play with them and make them happy. Some students believed that a good father must criticize children when they made mistakes and at the same time he should help them to make progress. A few students felt that good fathers could take good care of children,and children could depend on them.
But I think a good father can give us courage,he always encourages me never to give up and leads me to success.   

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過去時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: some students believed that 一些學生認為，at the same time 同時，make progress 取得進步，depend on 依賴，give up 放棄等。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。