Question

假如你是小明，在英國夏令營活動中，你和來自不同國家的中學生交流了各自的職業(yè)夢想�，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)表格的信息，在班會課上做一個匯報。

Name	What	Why
Bobbie (UK)	movie star	1. popular 2. love acting
Mark  ( U.S.A)	professional basketball player	make much money play basketball very well
Xiao Ming	...	... ...

注意：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息；
2. 開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，請續(xù)寫并完成此匯報；
3. 詞數(shù)：70個左右。開頭部分不計入短文詞匯的總數(shù)。
Dear classmates,
I am reporting to tell you about our dreams. ______________________________                       
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Answer 1

Dear classmates,
I am reporting to tell you about our dreams.Bobbie who is from UK wants to be a movie star.In his opinin ,movie stars are popular with most people.and he loves acting.he thinks it’s interesting and exciting to act in the movie.
Mark comes from USA.To be a professional baskball player is his job dream all the time. He thinks he would make much money if he were a famous professional baskball player.Also,he plays basktball very much.
As for me ,Iwant to be asinger because I like music and I have a nice voice.now I have music classes three times a week.
Different people have different job dreams in the summer camp.But we are all willing to try our best to achieve our dreams.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹英國夏令營中，來自不同國家的中學生的職業(yè)夢想。主要介紹，來自哪里，職業(yè)夢想是什么，為什么有這種想法。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會用到一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時。表格中給出了是三個人的名字。Bobbie ,Mark,第三人稱，因為你是小明，所以介紹自己時要用第一人稱I。由于介紹每個人的內(nèi)容類型近似，所以要注意句式的變化。
【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時注意避免句式重復而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如is from, comes from ,are popular with, are all willing to try our best等。句式it’s interesting and exciting to act in the movie. Bobbie who is from UK wants to be a movie star.定語從句， As for me，等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。