Question

電視已成為我們生活中的一部分，看電視有好處也有壞處，根據(jù)你自身的體會，給大家提些自己的看法。請根據(jù)下面提供的要點寫一篇短文：
1. 我們應(yīng)該選擇合適的節(jié)目，比如看紀錄片可以幫助我們了解許多有關(guān)自然和歷史的知識；
2. 周一至周五我們學(xué)習(xí)很忙，我們最好在周末或假日里看電視；
3. 必須計劃好自己的時間，試圖在學(xué)習(xí)和看電視之間取得平衡是很重要的；
4. 看電視可以幫助我們放松，同時也能學(xué)到許多有用的知識；
5. 看太多的電視對眼睛不好, 你認為……。
注意：1.全文要通順、連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)80左右；
3. 對第6要點作1-2句話的適當發(fā)揮。
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Answer 1

Now more and more people own televisions, which present a very vivid world to us. On television, we can watch exciting matches and see most of the places of interests without going there ourselves. Television also plays an educational role in our daily life. Children enjoy learning much interesting knowledge from TV. By providing various TV university courses, television offers various educational programs for different viewers. 
However, television can also be harmful. It hurts our eyes. Watching TV too much influences our sleep and work. Now many students spend too much time on TV, which reduces their study time and does great harm to our eyes.
In a word, we should choose some good programs to watch, especially for children

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果
【亮點說明】范文中出現(xiàn)很多常見的詞組：plays an educational role in 起重要作用；learn sth from從中當中學(xué)到； spend sth on sth 在。。花費時間或金錢；do harm to對。。有害。 Now more and more people own televisions, which present a very vivid world to us在這個句子中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。Watching TV too much influences our sleep and work這個句子中動名詞做主語。Now many students spend too much time on TV, which reduces their study time and does great harm to our eyes這個句子中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，and連接reduces與does，時態(tài)保持一致。