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假如你叫張賓，Jimmy是你的筆友，他下個(gè)月就要到中國旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面e-mail給他介紹國內(nèi)非常值得一去的地方。

省／市	供考慮的地點(diǎn)
首都北京	長城――世界七大奇跡之一；故宮博物館――輝煌壯麗的清朝宮殿群；圓明園――舉世聞名的皇家園林。
陜西省	秦陵兵馬俑――世界上著名的景點(diǎn)；華山――懸崖峭壁，山勢(shì)險(xiǎn)峻；離西安不遠(yuǎn)。
湖南省	張家界——一個(gè)四周環(huán)山的好地方。

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參考詞匯：imperial adj.　皇帝的steep adj.陡峭的  the Terra Cotta Warriors秦陵兵馬俑
Dear Jimmy,
I am very glad to hear that you’ll come to China for a visit next month. Now I will teel you something about the places of interest in China.
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Oh, I must stop now. I hope you will have a good trip!
Good luck!
Yours
Zhang Bin

Answer 1

Dear Jimmy,
I am very glad to hear that you’ll come to China for a visit next month. Now I will teel you something about the places of interest in China.
First, Beijing is the capital of China. There are many amazing places you can’t miss. For example, the Great Wall—one of the seven wonders in the world. The Palace Museum—the Imperial Palace of the Qing Dynasty; Yuanmingyuan—a famous imperial garden.
Second, you’d better go to Xi’an of Shanxi province for the Terra Cotta Warriors lies there. They are the most famous in the world. And you may also go to Huashan—a dangerously steep mountain. It’s not far from Xi’an.
At last, I hope you’ll pay a visit to Hunan. Hunan is famous for Zhangjiajei, a beautiful place with mountains and rivers.
Oh, I must stop now. I hope you will have a good trip!
Good luck!

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