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湖南衛(wèi)視真人秀《爸爸去哪兒》收視火爆，節(jié)目講述了五對笨手笨腳的爸爸帶著孩子去陌生的地方完成一些有趣但是艱難的任務(wù)。為了完成任務(wù)，孩子們學(xué)會了團(tuán)隊精神和如何與人相處。你所在的小組對“如何與人相處”展開了討論，請根據(jù)以下你所在的小組的討論結(jié)果，以“How to get on well with others”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

Suggestions	learn to share respect(尊重) others communicate with each other …
My suggestion	…

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How to Get on Well with Others
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           

Answer 1

How to Get on Well with Others
As we know students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get along well.

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所給的題目和一檔電視節(jié)目并結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇文章，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言準(zhǔn)確地描述作文內(nèi)容。寫作中要重點(diǎn)描述如何與人相處這一核心內(nèi)容，表達(dá)出習(xí)作者對這一問題的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文簡明、扼要地闡明了自己對如何與人相處這一問題的看法，并包含了題干中所要求的基本信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含倒裝句的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如Only in these ways can we get along well.，還有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^度與銜接語，如First of all,，Besides，What’s more,，In my opinion,學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。