Question

作文（10分）

介紹一下你的家庭，內(nèi)容包括你和家人的個(gè)人信息。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I am a 16- year -old school boy, I study in an International school, I study hard at school becaust I want to do well in my lessons, I am good at all the subjects but I like P.E best of all, I often play baskets with my classmates after class, sports can make me wise and healthy, I want to be a basketball player in the future. I also like collecting stamps, I have about 500 stamps now. there are 5 people in my family, my grandparents , my parents and I, they love me and I love them very much. We live in Eeijing, there are many places of interest in Beijing, welcome to Beijing !

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如I study hard at school becaust I want to do well in my lessons, I am good at all the subjects but I like P.E best of all,等，also等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

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