Question

學(xué)會感恩，請描述一個對你有幫助的人。（文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名）

注意：詞數(shù)：60---80詞左右；（共15分）

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I would like to say, thank you ,dear teacher. You always treat us students as your own children. No matter how bad the weather is or how sick you are feeling. You never miss the classes because your personal reason.

I would like to say, thank you, dear teacher. You teach us how to solve the questions and you also tell us how to face the difficulties in our daily lives. Because of you, we will never lost the goal we students should have, and now we are getting more and more close to that goal.

I would like to say, thank you, dear teacher. Your shining smile make us feel confident when we face the exams. And your words we will keep in mind to guide our actions. This confidence and the guide will help us find the right way to step on. We will never get lost any more.

Thank you, my teacher.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者介紹一個對自己有幫助的人。小作者把感謝老師表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。小作者寫的這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如You always treat us students as your own children. No matter how bad the weather is or how sick you are feeling. You teach us how to solve the questions and you also tell us how to face the difficulties in our daily lives. Because of you, we will never lost the goal we students should have, and now we are getting more and more close to that goal. 有一些好的固定短語還有連詞。

考點(diǎn)：考查命題類作文。