Question

你覺得你的校園生活安全嗎？請你以“How to Keep Safe in School”為題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />內(nèi)容包括：
1. 描述一件發(fā)生在你身上或你看到的發(fā)生在校園里的意外事件（經(jīng)過與結(jié)果）
2. 提出解決這種校園意外事件的建議（至少兩條）
3. 希望每個學(xué)生要注意校園安全

Answer 1

Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough. For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in the hospital for two weeks. So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep one eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last , I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般過去式敘述一件發(fā)生在學(xué)校的意外事件。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文觀點(diǎn)分明，論證了學(xué)校安全的必要性。本文用到了征求建議的語氣I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways.這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。提出了學(xué)生和老師在學(xué)校應(yīng)怎么注意安全。