Question

有一種節(jié)約叫光盤，有一種公益叫光盤！所謂光盤，就是吃光你盤子中的食物，拒絕浪費(fèi)，珍惜糧食！針對(duì)這項(xiàng)行動(dòng)，并根據(jù)以下提示，請(qǐng)你以“No Wasting On Food”為題寫一篇短文，號(hào)召大家參與這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。
要點(diǎn)提示：
Reason:
1. a waste of food, money
2. pollute the environment
……
Suggestion:
1. eat up all your food/clear your plate
2. leftovers(剩飯菜)……
3. order less or smaller dishes
注意：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語句流暢，書寫規(guī)范；
3. 詞數(shù)80-100詞；
4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、地名等信息；
5. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
No Wasting On Food
Recently, many restaurants around our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign(活動(dòng)) against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. ___________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Recently, many restaurants in our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活動(dòng)） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.
Many people around us also pay more attention to saving food in their daily life. A number of people have realized the importance of saving food. I believe it is meaningful for us to take an active part in this activity. It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food but eat too little. And it’s not easy for farmers to produce the food for us. There are still too many poor people in the poor areas in China. They don’t have enough food to eat. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign.                            
What should we do in our daily life to waste less food? First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restaurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later. In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food.                         .

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以No Wasting On Food為題，介紹一下光盤行動(dòng)。所謂的光盤行動(dòng)，就是吃光你盤子里的食物，珍惜糧食，拒絕浪費(fèi)。這篇短文主要包含兩個(gè)部分：第一部分是我們要吃光盤子里所有食物的原因，有兩個(gè)，一是這是一種錢和食物的浪費(fèi)；二是這樣做還會(huì)污染環(huán)境；第二部分是我們應(yīng)該怎樣做才能節(jié)約糧食，不浪費(fèi)，為此提出一些建議。我們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并且還要使這些內(nèi)容更充實(shí)。例如我們?cè)谔峤ㄗh的時(shí)候，需要將這些要點(diǎn)補(bǔ)充成完整的句子，再加上自己對(duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)的理解，提出自己的建議。寫作時(shí)，我們可以聯(lián)系我們學(xué)過的句型和短語，多注意語句之間的連接，使表達(dá)流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了什么是光盤行動(dòng)。首先作者介紹了我們要吃光盤子里所有食物的原因，除了題目中給出的兩個(gè)原因之外，作者還補(bǔ)充了一個(gè)，即吃得太多對(duì)我們的健康沒有好處。這個(gè)補(bǔ)充比較適合這里的情景，比較貼切；接下來的第三段中作者寫了我們應(yīng)該怎樣做，才能拒絕浪費(fèi)。按照題目中的提示，作者主要寫了三個(gè)建議。在這篇短文中，作者使用了很多比較好的句式和短語，如Many people around us also pay more attention to saving food in their daily life、I believe it is meaningful for us to take an active part in this activity、Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food、In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food等。這些句型和短語的使用為短文增色不少。