Question

健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)于成長(zhǎng)中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的.
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫(xiě)一篇短文,首句已給出。
信息提示：健康飲食; 早睡早起,不熬夜; 參加運(yùn)動(dòng),強(qiáng)身健體。
要求:根據(jù)信息提示,把握要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不逐字翻譯。字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右。至少寫(xiě)出5個(gè)意思連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)法正確的句子。
I think healthy habits are very important for us.

Answer 1

I think healthy habits are very important for us.But how do you keep healthy ? Here some suggestions for you.I think firstly we should eat a lalanced diet and not eat too much meat or sugar .We also should form a good living habit .Getting up and going to bed early is good for our health,but staying up dose harm to our health.It is important for us to do some exercises to keep fit,because life lies in movement. Let us form healthy habits to enjoy our lives.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: healthy habits 健康的習(xí)慣；eat a lalanced diet 均衡飲食；is good for 對(duì)……有好處；but staying up dose harm to our health.但是熬夜對(duì)我們的健康有害等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.