Question

有的家長(zhǎng)贊成孩子做家務(wù)，有的卻不贊成。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)。

Answer 1

Nowadays, some students don’t help their parents do housework at home.
Some parents love their children too much and don’t let them work at home. On one hand, they think that their children are too busy with their studies and expect them to do well in their lessons only. On the other hand, they think their children don’t know how to do the housework.
However, I think students should help their parents do housework at home. First, that can develop their love for work. Next, that can help them understand their parents better. Last and the most important, that can help them cultivate their ability to live.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。根據(jù)話題內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：help their parents do housework，let them work at home，On one hand，On the other hand，their children don’t know how to do the housework.the most important,等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。