假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一 個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧) ,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

Dear Mr. Smith,

    On behalf of the students are going on the trip to Valencia in October,I’d like to say thanks for your hard work in organized the trip. It looks great and we are all really looking forward for it. However,we are wondering that we can suggest one change. The Sunday after we will arrive,there is a motorcycle event and we all want to go. At a moment,we are scheduled to visit a zoo that day. Although we,re sure the zoo is really nice,there seems a pity to miss so a big event while we are there. We hope the change is possibly and thanks again for all your works.

                                                       Yours,

                                                         Lin Ling

1. . .. the students are going ...   students 后加 who / that

2. . .. organized the trip.   organized →organizing

3. . .. looking forward for...   for→ to

4. . .. wondering that we ...   that→if / whether

5. . .. after we will...   去掉 will

6. At a moment...   a →tiie

7. . .. there seems a pity ...   there→it

8. . .. miss so a big ...   so→such

9. . .. change is possibly ...   possibly→possible   

10. . .. for all your works.   works→work

題目來源：2016年英語周報高三新課標(biāo) > 第43期 2015-2016高三課標(biāo)

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