Question

假如你叫李華，看到同學中的很多獨生子女在生活中存在下列現象，請你給報社編輯寫一封信，希望他們給同學們些建議：

比較自私，難與同學相處；

不會關心他人，難理解父母；

遇事不會處理，過分依賴父母；

學習不努力，怕吃苦。

注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)；3.參考詞匯——自私的 selfish

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I write to tell you some problems existing in some only-child students. Because the only-child families usually try every effort to give their children what they want and satisfy all their desires，these only-child students then become a little selfish，making them difficult to get along well with their classmates. What’s more，there exists the generation gap between students and parents. Some students are self-centered and can’t understand their parents.

In addition，some parents spoil their children by doing everything for them. Therefore， they depend on their parents too much and can’t deal with difficult situation. Owing to these，some students have become lazy and would rather not study hard.

I’m concerned about the situation. Could you please give some advice to help them get over these bad habits？

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。