Question

基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作(滿分15分)

2008年元月18日下午3點(diǎn)你校在學(xué)校禮堂舉行了成人宣誓儀式。請(qǐng)以日記的方式記錄儀式過(guò)程并談?wù)勛约旱母邢?

      

主       題	成長(zhǎng)，責(zé)任
參 加 人 員	高三師生，全體學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)
儀 式 程 序	1. 學(xué)生宣誓 2. 學(xué)生代表發(fā)言 （表達(dá)謝意，暢談理想） 3. 教師和家長(zhǎng)代表發(fā)言 （表示祝賀，寄予希望） 4. 各班學(xué)生表演節(jié)目

參考詞匯:  成人儀式a grown-up ceremony  宣誓 make an oath

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1. 舉行儀式的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；

2. 表格中的內(nèi)容;

3. 你自己的感想。

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1. 必須扣緊題目的要求，用5個(gè)規(guī)范的英語(yǔ)句子組織成連貫的文章

2. 組織成連貫的短文，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總句子數(shù)

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

1.句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性和復(fù)雜度

2. 短文內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性

        January 18th  Friday                                     Fine

Answer 1

January 18th  Friday                                     Fine

At 3:00 this afternoon, the teachers and students in Senior Three as well as our parents attended the grown-up ceremony held in the school hall, whose theme is “Growth and Responsibility”. First, we made an oath, and then a student, representing all of us, made a speech, showing our thanks to not only our parents but also our teachers and talking about our great ideals. After that, some teachers and parents offered us their congratulations and expressed their expectations for our future. Last, we watched wonderful performances put on by students from different classes. The ceremony was over, but it has made me well aware that I have grown up and I am supposed to shoulder the responsibility for our society.

解析:

日記要求時(shí)態(tài)多用過(guò)去式，寫(xiě)全要點(diǎn)：1. 舉行儀式的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2. 表格中的內(nèi)容; 3. 你自己的感想；注意過(guò)渡，重點(diǎn)放在自己的感想上。