Question

假定英杲上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言 錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A) ,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃1橫線，并&該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 指出錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

   2. 只允許修改0處，多者(從第11處起) 不計分。

    When my grandfather left school,he got his first job as a office worker. In those days,he was extreme thin. He paid very little,so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time,and he looks just like me,but a lot thin!When he grew older,he worked at all sorts of thing,such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life,but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed,like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.

Answer 1

71. ...a office worker.                    a →an

72. . .. extreme thin.                    extreme →extremely

73.   He paid ...                         paid前加 was

74. . .. eating a lot.                    eating→ eat

75. . .. photos of her ...                  her → him

76. . .. a lot thin!                      thin →thinner

77. . .. sorts of thing ...                  thing →things

78. . .. woriced as a ...                    worked→working  

79. He worked hardly ...                    hardly → hard

80. . .. found out time ... .                   去掉out