Question

在很多學(xué)校食堂，浪費(fèi)糧食的現(xiàn)象屢見不鮮。請結(jié)合你生活中的實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勏旅鎯煞鶊D給你的啟示和感想。
注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和你學(xué)校的名字；
2．詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)。

                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                            

Answer 1

As is shown in the picture above, a large quantity of food is wasted in the school dining hall while in contrast to it, a starving little girl is swallowing something dirty, possibly from the rubbish, obviously suffering from hunger. These two pictures reflect what is going on in our daily life.—some are wasting a lot while some are starving.
We students living in the city always have enough to eat, and many of us are not aware of the significance of cherishing the food we have, leading to tons of rice being wasted every day. But when we regard three meals a day as a routine, just think there are children in poor area who are struggling for food. Before we abandon food in our plates, we should remind ourselves of the spreading problem of starvation and malnutrition.
Considering the serious problem, I hold the view that it’s high time that we should raise our awareness by taking steps to improve the situation, Just take meals we are able to consume, and treasure what we have and give a hand to those in need. It’s everybody’s responsibility to make our earth better. Stop wasting food, and we are sure to make a difference to the world.

試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，也是看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了浪費(fèi)糧食的現(xiàn)象的問題，寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇書面表達(dá)結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，復(fù)雜句居多，還使用了一些常用的短語：regard …as認(rèn)為…是， remind …. of提醒….， give a hand to助…一臂之力，be aware of意識到，make a difference to有影響，有差別， As is shown in the picture above, a large quantity of food is wasted in the school dining hall.這句話用了非限制性定語從句，while in contrast to it, a starving little girl is swallowing something dirty, possibly from the rubbish, obviously suffering from hunger.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， These two pictures reflect what is going on in our daily life—some are wasting a lot while some are starving.這句話用了賓語從句， We students living in the city always have enough to eat, and many of us are not aware of the significance of cherishing the food we have, leading to tons of rice being wasted every day.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做定語，和現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語， Considering the serious problem, I hold the view that it’s high time that we should raise our awareness by taking steps to improve the situation, 這句話用了評述性狀語，同位語從句和虛擬語氣， It’s everybody’s responsibility to make our earth better. 這句話用了it做形式主語。