Question

最近，你們學(xué)校每天晚上組織學(xué)生收看《新聞聯(lián)播》。對此，有人表示反對，認為學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)；也有人表示贊同，認為能使自己身心放松，而且了解國內(nèi)外大事。請你寫一篇100詞左右的短文，發(fā)表一下自己的觀點。開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Recently our school has set aside some time for students to watch The Daily News Broadcasting.
 
 

Answer 1

Recently our school has set aside some time for students to watch The Daily News Broadcasting.
Some people approve of the idea, and they think it is a good way to relax after a day’s hard work. Besides, they can also take advantage of the chance to know what is happening at home and abroad.
However, others are strongly against it. They say they bear so heavy a learning load that they can’t spare any time for TV. Therefore, they think it is a waste of time.
As for me, I’m in favor of the idea. Being buried in books all day does harm to us students both physically and mentally. By watching TV, we can have access to the information that cannot be obtained from books and help us to communicate and understand each other better.

試題分析：考查話題作文。首先確定題材。確定正反方觀點。對正反方觀點進行梳理，簡化加工相應(yīng)的句子。分析中文句式的特點，啟發(fā)學(xué)生將無主句變成有主句，將難句簡單化。正方觀點：一部分人贊同晚上觀看《新聞聯(lián)播》,他們認為：觀看《新聞聯(lián)播》能有助于他們放松身心；觀看《新聞聯(lián)播》可以讓他們了解國內(nèi)外所發(fā)生的重大事件；觀看《新聞聯(lián)播》可以豐富他們的生活。反方觀點：另一部分人反對晚上觀看《新聞聯(lián)播》,他們認為：他們每天很多功課要做；看《新聞聯(lián)播》與他們高考一點關(guān)系都沒有；看《新聞聯(lián)播》會浪費他們太多時間。作者的觀點：看《新聞聯(lián)播》有助于拓寬視野；看《新聞聯(lián)播》有助于明確為何要學(xué)習(xí)。因此，會增加學(xué)習(xí)的動力，所以贊成觀看《新聞聯(lián)播》。
【亮點說明】.范文出彩的地方很多：熟練運用了高中階段的重點短語和句型：set aside，approve of ，take advantage of ，in favor of ，do harm to，have access to。Besides, they can also take advantage of the chance to know what is happening at home and abroad.這句話用了賓語從句，Being buried in books all day does harm to us students both physically and mentally.這句話用了動名詞短語作主語；還有范文還使用了Besides, However, Therefore這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。