Question

如今很多中學(xué)生都紛紛開起了自己的博客, 請對這一現(xiàn)象進行簡要介紹，并發(fā)表自己的看法。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2. 參考調(diào)匯：開博客open one’s blog
Nowadays, it’s not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.
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Answer 1

One possible version
Nowadays, it’s not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide a platform to show their talent and release their pressure, thus making it more and more popular with high school students. On the contrary, many parents and teachers think that managing one’s blog takes a lot of time and energy.
Personally speaking, I approve of the former opinion. Opening and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various abilities such as writing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the procedures of organizing our blogs.
Anyway, the blog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.

試題分析: 本文要求對如今的中學(xué)生開了自己的博客這一現(xiàn)象進行簡要介紹，并發(fā)表自己的看法。兩個方面的內(nèi)容要求。然后確定人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。 時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。 
【亮點說明】文中使用了For one thing表明了開微博的好處，用On the contrary說明了其缺點。Personally speaking,開始表達自己的觀點。注意了開頭用詞的變化。同時用了thus –ing表示順理成章的理由；還用動詞的-ing做主語等；還運用了Only加狀語的倒裝句結(jié)構(gòu)等較復(fù)雜的句式。并注意了句子句子之間的銜接如用As a consequence，Anyway等等。
考點:提綱類作文。