Question

閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文

In China,with one or two parents going out to earn money,many children are left in their hometown in the countryside.These children are called “l(fā)eftover children”.A large number of leftover children have emerged since 1978,and the statistics showed in 2004,the total was 22 million.

Usually their grandparents or their parents’ friends or relatives look after these leftover children.Sometimes they are brought up by one of their parents at home.In most cases,their guardians are not quite educated.To them,making sure that the children are healthy and fed well is the most important task,and that the children are safe and sound is considered to have done a good job.But they seldom care about children’s study,their psychological needs,or mental demands.Neither do they spend some time teaching kids how to develop good habits.

Therefore,for most of the time,the leftover children can’t get emotional support from their parents,which can result in so many problems.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.以約30個詞概括短文的要點；

2.然后以約120個詞就“如何關(guān)心農(nóng)村留守兒童（leftover children）的成長？”的主題發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點：

（1）農(nóng)村留守孩子存在的原因；

（2）你認(rèn)為他們面臨的最大困難是什么；

（3）解決留守兒童問題的關(guān)鍵是什么；

（4）提出解決問題的措施。

【寫作要求】

1.你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不能直接引用原文的句子；

2.題目自定。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Show More Concern About the Leftover Children

The passage points out a worrying phenomenon in China that the leftover children living in the countryside have lacked their parents’ love because their parents have gone to make a fortune in cities.

As we all know,people living in the countryside have to work far away from their family to earn more money in order to create better living conditions for their children.However,the children have been separated from their parents and live with their grandparents or relatives,who are not well educated.So their study,their mental and psychological demands can’t be drawn attention to.In that case,it’s easy for them to get into bad habits,which can’t be corrected in time.What’s worse,the lack of parents’ love may make them feel lonely.

In my opinion,the key to solving the problem is to have love shining over them.Parents should keep in touch with them now and then,and be concerned about their psychological demands.

【解析】本文講述的是在中國由于父母外出工作，有太多的留守兒童，衍生出 很多的問題。留守兒童出現(xiàn)的因為在于父母離家。最大的困難在于教育方面，爺爺奶奶很難約束住孩子。

要想解決這個問題，關(guān)鍵在于學(xué)校與社區(qū)及家庭三方面結(jié)合，真正關(guān)心留守兒童的成長。本文對考生的要求較高，有很強(qiáng)的思想性，和思辨性，梳理要點的時候一定要直接，不要有太多無關(guān)話題。寫作的時候注意使用合適的連接詞和高級句型和詞匯。