Question

在日常學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活中，學(xué)會(huì)與人合作非常重要。為此，你班貼出了一張通知。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)通知、寫作要點(diǎn)和要求寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。

Notice Our monitor suggests that we hold an English Speech on January 25th. Everyone is invited to attend the speech. Those who will attend it, please get ready for your speech before it. The topic of the speech is “Being a good partner”. January 10th, 2014

寫作要點(diǎn)：
與人合作的重要性。
怎樣成為一個(gè)好的合作伙伴 （2-3條建議）。
你理想的合作伙伴是怎樣的。
寫作要求：
短文填寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
短文詞數(shù)不少于100(不含已寫好的部分)。
內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。
書寫須清楚、工整。

Answer 1

Good afternoon , everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “being a good partner”. Cooperation is  a good way for us to learn from each other as well as to save us a lot of  time and energy . Thus we can complete our work successful and efficiently.
How can we become a good partner? My suggestion are as follows. Firstly, we should try to listen to others’ opinions and never force your ideas on others. Secondly, no one in the world is perfect. Let’s learn to put up with their shortcomings and discover their advantages , which will surely encourage each other to do the best.
As far as I’m concerned, when I am lucky enough to find someone who is easy-going and warm-hearted to cooperate with, it will make us feel very happy.On the other hand, However, a person who is hard- working and strong-minded will have a good effect on me. Hope you are a good partner for me.
That’s all, Thank you!

試題分析：試題貼近考生實(shí)際生活，給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略，主要圍繞為何合作，與誰(shuí)合作，怎樣合作三部分展開，其中“怎樣成為好的合作伙伴”要求給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，屬于半開放性話題,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.在寫作時(shí)注意把握好以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。(2)行文緊湊，過(guò)渡自然。(3)要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清楚。(4)語(yǔ)法正確，時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。(5)用詞無(wú)誤，控制得當(dāng)(100詞之間)。(6)認(rèn)真復(fù)查，胸有成竹。尤其是“怎樣成為好的合作伙伴”部分要求給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，要注意不要偏離文章中心
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】(1)使用一些如Firstly,secondly,however等承接詞進(jìn)行連接,層次清晰。(2)多變的高級(jí)句式如非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用，Let’s learn to put up with their shortcomings and discover their advantages , which will surely encourage each other to do the best.另外，設(shè)問(wèn)句的運(yùn)用How can we become a good partner?使文章銜接更自然。還有詞組：as follows “如下”，put up with“容忍”，As far as I’m concerned“據(jù)我所知”等。