Question

某中外合資企業(yè)在一家英文報上登了一則廣告，招聘一名秘書。假如你叫李華，請根據(jù)下面的簡歷表用英語寫一封求職信。

姓名	李華	性別	女	身高	1.62米
出生年月	1985.5	婚否	未婚	身體狀況	健康
畢業(yè)學(xué)校			上海商學(xué)院
其他：1. 有三年工作經(jīng)歷。      2. 打字快，熟練計算機(jī)操作。 3. 擅長英語，懂一些德語。4. 辦事認(rèn)真，待人誠懇，與人和睦相處。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120字左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 短文需包括表中所有要點，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
3. 參考詞匯：上海商學(xué)院 Shanghai Commercial College
Dear sir,
I’m writing to apply for the position as a secretary in your company, which I saw advertised in today’s paper. I believe I have the qualifications to fit the job.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I’m writing to apply for the position as a secretary in your company, which I saw advertised in today’s paper. I believe I have the qualifications to fit the job.
Born in May,1985, I’m now 25 years old and unmarried. I’m 1.62 metres tall and in good health. I graduated from Shanghai Commercial College. Now I have had three years of experience as a secretary and am quite familiar with the office work. Not only can I type well, but more important I can use computer skilfully. My English is excellent. In addition, I have some knowledge of the German language. I am always careful in everything I do. As a female, I am kind and easy to get on with.
I’d greatly appreciate the chance to work in your company. Of course, I’ll work hard if I can hold the position. Thank you very much for your kind attention.
I’m eager for your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點評：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。