Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上英語(yǔ)老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I went shopping in the center of the city yesterday afternoon. It was six o’clock before I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passenger, all of whom kept silent. A mother with her little son were sitting nearby. All of a sudden, the son cried loudly. The mother tries to do what she could make him stop crying. However, the son went on crying. After a long time, a man seating next to the mother said angrily, “Why don’t you give the child what she wants.” The mother answered quiet, “I would if I could, and what he wants is your hat.” Hearing of this, all the passengers burst into laughter.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 before ---- when

 passenger---- passengers

 were---- was

 tries ---- tried

 make 前加to

 seating ---- seated

 she ---- he

 quiet ---- quietly

 and ---- but

 去掉of

【解析】

試題分析：文章介紹作者昨天在公共汽車上看見的一幕，一個(gè)婦女帶著兒子，兒子突然哭起來(lái)，一個(gè)男子不耐煩，讓婦女給孩子想要的東西，結(jié)果男孩想要的是他的帽子。

 句意：當(dāng)我乘公共汽車回家的時(shí)候是6點(diǎn)。before ---- when

 句意：公共汽車上都是乘客。Passenger是可數(shù)名詞，后面用名詞復(fù)數(shù)： passengers

 主語(yǔ)是A mother with her little son ，由with連接兩個(gè)主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)和前面的一致：were---- was

 這個(gè)故事是昨天發(fā)生的，yesterday ，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)：tries ---- tried

 句意：媽媽盡力想讓兒子停止哭泣。 make 前加to，是不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)

 seat是及物動(dòng)詞，the man和seat是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用 seated做定語(yǔ)

 句意：你為什么不給孩子他想要的。指代the son用he

 quiet 是形容詞，修飾名詞，quietly是副詞，修飾動(dòng)詞

 句意：如果我能，我會(huì)給的，但是他想要的是你的帽子。表示轉(zhuǎn)折 and ---- but

 hear做及物動(dòng)詞用是聽見，hear of“聽說(shuō)”

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)