Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上英語(yǔ)老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear friends,
As we can see, the environment around us is getting worse other than better. Our life and health have affected greatly. The earth is our home, but we have a duty to take care of it, not only for ourselves but for future generation. Fortunate, more and more people have become aware of this problem. Many effective measures have been taken by the government to dealing with them.
As a student I think we should do something to improve the environment. First, go to the school on foot or by bike as often as possible. Second, turn on the lights and other electrical appliances before leaving the room. Third, never throw rubbish here and there.
It’s time that we do something to protect our environment.

Answer 1

Dear friends,
As we can see, the environment around us is getting worse other(--rather) than better. Our life and health have(+been) affected greatly. The earth is our home, but(--and 或so) we have a duty to take care of it, not only for ourselves but for future generation(+s). Fortunate(+ly), more and more people have become aware of this problem. Many effective measures have been taken by the government to dealing(-deal) with them(-it).
As a student I think we should do something to improve the environment. First, go to the(去掉) school on foot or by bike as often as possible. Second, turn on（--off） the lights and other electrical appliances before leaving the room. Third, never throw rubbish here and there.
It’s time that we do(--did) something to protect our environment.

解析【小題1】other(--rather) rather than 根據(jù)句子的意思這里是變壞“而不是”變好。
【小題2】have(+been) 這里是一個(gè)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，環(huán)境是被影響了。
【小題3】but(--and 或so)由上下文可知這里是一個(gè)順接關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。
【小題4】generation(+s)后代應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題5】Fortunate(+ly)應(yīng)該用副詞對(duì)整個(gè)句子進(jìn)行說(shuō)明。
【小題6】dealing(-deal)前面是不定式符號(hào)to,后面接動(dòng)詞原形。
【小題7】them(-it) it指代前面提及的單數(shù)名詞problem。
【小題8】the(去掉) go to school上學(xué)。Go to the school到學(xué)校去。
【小題9】on（--off） 句意是指離開(kāi)時(shí)要關(guān)閉燈光。
【小題10】do(--did)  it is time后面的從句使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣。