Question

你是成都七中高三年級的一名學(xué)生，今年即將高中畢業(yè)。請你根據(jù)下面所給的要點提示，就關(guān)于“高考志愿選擇”用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)W校New Babel英語雜志投稿，描述學(xué)生中存在的兩種想法。

	觀 點	理 由
1	首先選擇專業(yè)	1．個人興趣       2．社會需求
2	首先選擇大學(xué)	1．眾多課程選擇   2．求職更受青睞
3	你的看法并說明原因

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
A good major or a good university?
Every student will be faced with the choice when he passes the College Entrance Examination. Should he choose a good major or a good university first?
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Answer 1

A good major or a good university
Every student will be faced with the choice when he passes the College Entrance Examination. Should he choose a good major or a good university first? Different students will offer different answers.
Some students think the choice should be based on their own interests, which makes it possible for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. Or they should select major according to the need of society. Those who think differently believe that a good university provides a wide range of courses which may be important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job.
Personally, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達(dá)這些要點以外，還要闡述自己的觀點，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：be based on“以…為基礎(chǔ)”， according to“根據(jù)”， a wide range of“各種各樣的”，范文中的句式多變，運(yùn)用不同的語法知識： Some students think the choice should be based on their own interests, which makes it possible for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句和it做形式賓語。Those who think differently believe that a good university provides a wide range of courses which may be important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. 這句話是長句，包括兩個定語從句和兩個賓語從句， If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.這句話用了不定式和狀語從句。